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Julie's
Review - 1000 Miles
Off Course
A
mystery surrounding a now-dead plane crash survivor,
potentially tainted baby formula, and the reappearance
of Annie Capra come together nicely to grab virtual
viewers right from the phrase "Hell, I've been dead
before." This episode starts off intriguing and ends
with nice ties to SEASON-6 finale.
Though the episode cannot be viewed on television,
descriptions of gestures, looks, camera angles, and
scenes create a strong visual picture for virtual
viewers, bringing the episode to life.
Strengths
Storyline:
Both storylines were original, and the intrigue
surrounding the deaths of the Flight 815 survivors added
depth to the episode. The botulism scare, from both
angles—the dead baby and the scare with Madeline—were
riveting. Dialogue: Dialogue in this episode was
very true to character. The characters' quirks were all
expressed nicely through dialogue, and nobody departed
from their persona. Artwork: The pictures in the
episode were all well placed and were an excellent
accompaniment to the text. The picture of Kate with
Madeline; the picture with Woody, Nigel, and Jordan in
Autopsy One; and the picture of Bug, Madeline, Jeffrey,
and Lily in the waiting room at the pediatrician's
office were especially good. Relationship
development: This episode moved the Jordan Woody
relationship along nicely, with great continuity from
the initial Virtual Season 7 episode and from season 6.
Additionally, it really highlighted the fact that Lily
and Jeffrey are really not resolving issues in
their complex relationship. Bug continues to be an
excellent counterbalance to Lily and Jeffrey, a true
rock for Madeline.
Favorite quote:
"Oh! You want me to be the first someone."
Areas for Improvement
There are few areas for improvement in this episode.
Artwork: Two pictures—one with Sidney and Garret
looking at the X-ray and the one with Jordan and the
priest—looked less authentic than other photos.
Storyline: With regard to the Ryan Davidson story,
it wasn't clear what was being looked at in the X-ray. A
full autopsy would have shown brain bruising from the
brain hitting the skull; without the full autopsy, it
would have otherwise been difficult to have a
shaken-baby diagnosis. The only other quirk in the
episode was this: would a wad of cash the size of a
double roll of toilet paper fit in a guy's pocket?
This episode was engaging from the start, and it played
like a very real episode. I'll give it 3.75 scalpels out
of 4 for engaging dialogue, an intriguing storyline,
excellent artwork, and a great conclusion.
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