Julie's Review of Charmer
While Jordan and Nigel trade lines from Indiana Jones,
they are shown to the body of a 22 year-old man covered
in snake bites. Though he'd signed up for a charismatic
reverend's rehab program, he ended up the victim of a
murder. The episode starts off quickly and shakes Jordan
to the core when Woody is kidnapped after crossing the
reverend.
Strengths
Storyline:
The story was very well written, and though there are
often stories centered on charismatic religious figures,
this one definitely worked, featuring the oily Reverend
Midkiff who conveniently twisted bible verses to suit
his warped sense of self importance.
Dialogue: The dialogue in this episode entirely
consistent with televised Crossing Jordan
episodes, and discourse between Jordan and Garret was
especially touching when Jordan was melting down. When
Garret delivered the lines " You can either stay in
here…in this storage closet…and admire all the cleaning
supplies or you can get up and go back with me into
Trace and try to find something that will lead us to him
Artwork: Harbor Runner's artwork was a key
element in this episode, as it clearly provided a detail
critical to finding where Woody was being held.
Additionally, the artwork helped the reader to picture
scenes that were vividly described by episode writers
Bourbon and NCCJFAN. Music: The episode music was
well selected, especially the more poignant songs, No
Place That Far and Only You, which truly
depicted the emotion of the scenes.
Personal development: Jordan made some very
definite progress emotionally in this episode. While her
first instinct was to hide in a closet and declare that
she couldn't love a cop, she demonstrated growth when
she faced Woody and didn't run. Continuity:
This episode made a reference to Jump, Push, Fall
that was actually welcome, as Jordan said the phrase, "I
need you. Don’t leave me," with more favorable
results.
Favorite Quote: There was definitely a clear-cut
winner in this episode, as Jordan's character was so
perfectly captured in the phrase "Holy man my ass.
And I’m Mother Teresa."
Areas for Improvement
Medical facts:
There were not many elements that served to impact the
episode negatively, although some of the drug-related
facts were not entirely accurate. Compazine is
prochlorperazine, and that and perphenazine are not
sedatives (though they can be sedating). They're
antiemetics, and they aren't drugs that patients get
hooked on. But such would likely only be of note to
those in the pharmacy/medical profession…
This Virtual Season 7 episode, brought to us by writers
Bourbon and NCCJFAN and artist Harbor Runner, was an
outstanding effort. I'll give it 3.75 scalpels out of 4
for an edge-of-your-seat episode that tested Jordan's
mettle, and showed her ability to overcome her urge to
run.
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